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Cut the Clutter From Your Sentences

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by stephanie morrill | nov 24

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that was some amazing word warring over the weekend you guys! i loved seeing all the support and encouragement you gave to each other

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those of you who are participating in nanowrimo may want to save this post

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what kinds of words clutter up sentences

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cliches

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unnecessary descriptions

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vague words

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passive words

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telling words

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quantifying words

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let's get out our mental pens and go sentence by sentence

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john gave the door a glance

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i see sentences like this all the time and it's a needlessly complicated way to say: john glanced at the door

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editing challenge: run a search in your manuscri ) and see if you've over-complicated any actions

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it was deathly silent in the room

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he almost felt like maybe nothing was really chasing him